domingo, 27 de enero de 2008

1º Bachillerato - English

You can post your compositions to me in e-format. I'll check and give them back to you a.s.a.p.

3 comentarios:

Jorge García dijo...

About unit4?

Anónimo dijo...

Ejemplo de redaccion:
MAGAZINE ACCUSES EMINEM OF RACISM
The Source magazine has Eminem on the defensive over a
decade-old song that calls black girls "stupid" and depicts them as gold
diggers.
5. In the latest chapter of the Source's campaign against Eminem, Source
managers David Mays and Raymond Scott held a press conference
to play the recording. It features Eminem, who is white, saying things
like: "Black girls are dumb, and white girls are good chicks."
Eminem recognized that he made the song making fun of black women.
10. He said in a statement it was "something I made out of anger, stupidity
and frustration when I was a teenager. " "I'd just broken up with my
girlfriend, who was African-American, and I reacted like the angry, stupid
kid I was. I hope people will take it for the foolishness that it was, not for
what somebody is trying to make it into today. "
15. Although Mays and Scott expressed outrage at the tape and called
Eminem a racist, black rappers often depict black women in far less
flattering terms. Of course, Eminem is white, as is Mays.
Eminem has a history of inflammatory and derogatory comments about
women, gays, and just about everyone else in between, including his
20. mother and his ex-wife. His comments about women and gays drew the
ire of women's rights groups and gay activists when his "The Marshall
Mathers LP" was nominated for album of the year at the 2001 Grammys.
Of late, however, Eminem seems to have toned down his bitter words,
and has gained more acceptance. Besides winning several Grammys,
25. he won an Oscar this year for his song "Lose yourself' from his
semi-autobiographical movie "8 Mile."

Jorge García dijo...

Aquí va mi corrección:
MAGAZINE ACCUSES EMINEM OF RACISM
The Source magazine has Eminem on the defensive over a
decade-old song that calls black girls "stupid" and depicts them as gold
diggers.
5. In the latest chapter of the Source's campaign against Eminem, Source
managers David Mays and Raymond Scott held a press conference
to play the recording. It features Eminem, who is white, saying things
like: "Black girls are dumb, and white girls are good chicks."
Eminem recognized that he made the song making fun of black women.
10. He said in a statement it was "something I made out of anger, stupidity
and frustration when I was a teenager. " "I'd just broken up with my
girlfriend, who was African-American, and I reacted like the angry, stupid
kid I was. I hope people will take it for the foolishness that it was, not for
what somebody is trying to make it into today. "
15. Although Mays and Scott expressed outrage at the tape and called
Eminem a racist, black rappers often depict black women in far less
flattering terms. Of course, Eminem is white, as is Mays.
Eminem has a history of inflammatory and derogatory comments about
women, gays, and just about everyone else in between, including his
20. mother and his ex-wife. His comments about women and gays drew the
ire of women's rights groups and gay activists when his "The Marshall
Mathers LP" was nominated for album of the year at the 2001 Grammys.
Of late, however, Eminem seems to have toned down his bitter words,
and has gained more acceptance. Besides winning several Grammys,
25. he won an Oscar this year for his song "Lose yourself' from his
semi-autobiographical movie "8 Mile."
Buen trabajo, ningún error.